We are Yr 2 & 3 learners at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mrs Hiddleston.
Amazing Bella. That is an amazing story you have written about healthy sandwiches.
Bella I loved what you put on your healthy sandwich great job and the topping I liked was the cheese.
Bella I loved what kind of thing you have put into your sandwich and I bet it was yummy. Keep it up!
Hi Bella I like the way you did your writing and keep it up.
Hi bella I like how you made your sandwich with lots of healthy things inside your sandwich
Wow! Bella congratulations on your writing sandwich. Also I like how you put all those effort in it.
Hi bella I like your writing it look's cool .
Hi Bella I like your writing and your sentence is cool.
Hi Bella I like how you made your sandwich and I like the way you put lots of cheese and topping in your sandwich .
hi bella I like how you were makeiung a standwich so this is what I have to say to you keep up the good work .
This comment has been removed by the author.
Hello BellaGreat writing Bella,I bet your sandwich was yummy.
Keep up the great work Bella, your amazing.
Amazing Bella. That is an amazing story you have written about healthy sandwiches.
ReplyDeleteBella I loved what you put on your healthy sandwich great job and the topping I liked was the cheese.
ReplyDeleteBella I loved what kind of thing you have put into your sandwich and I bet it was yummy. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Bella I like the way you did your writing and keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi bella I like how you made your sandwich with lots of healthy things inside your sandwich
ReplyDeleteWow! Bella congratulations on your writing sandwich. Also I like how you put all those effort in it.
ReplyDeleteHi bella I like your writing it look's cool .
ReplyDeleteHi Bella I like your writing and your sentence is cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Bella I like how you made your sandwich and I like the way you put lots of cheese and topping in your sandwich .
ReplyDeletehi bella I like how you were makeiung a standwich so this is what I have to say to you keep up the good work .
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteHello Bella
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Bella,I bet your sandwich was yummy.
Keep up the great work Bella, your amazing.
ReplyDelete