We like Kryzel’s toy it makes a funny sound. It looks like lips and they are red.
We are Yr 2 & 3 learners at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mrs Hiddleston.
Thursday, May 24, 2018
Thursday, May 17, 2018
Keira’s writing
When it was time to edit I had to turn the lower case into a capital because Australia is a country and at the beginning of a sentence there is suppose to be a capital. I put full stops so that Miss knows that my story is finished. I used a comma because I made a list. After reading my writing again I noticed I need to put "in" before the two at the beginning of my story.
Sisilia’s writing
Sisilia needed to fix up her t because we needed a capital letter because it was a country. Densyn put a full stop on the end because the sentence was finished. We liked sisilia’s story so we gave it a smiley face.
Densyn’s writing
I tried really hard to sound out my words and I was doing capital letters for the place names.