We are Yr 2 & 3 learners at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mrs Hiddleston.
Amazing Bella. That is an amazing story you have written about healthy sandwiches.
Bella I loved what you put on your healthy sandwich great job and the topping I liked was the cheese.
Bella I loved what kind of thing you have put into your sandwich and I bet it was yummy. Keep it up!
Hi Bella I like the way you did your writing and keep it up.
Hi bella I like how you made your sandwich with lots of healthy things inside your sandwich
Wow! Bella congratulations on your writing sandwich. Also I like how you put all those effort in it.
Hi bella I like your writing it look's cool .
Hi Bella I like your writing and your sentence is cool.
Hi Bella I like how you made your sandwich and I like the way you put lots of cheese and topping in your sandwich .
hi bella I like how you were makeiung a standwich so this is what I have to say to you keep up the good work .
Hello BellaGreat writing Bella,I bet your sandwich was yummy.
Keep up the great work Bella, your amazing.
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Amazing Bella. That is an amazing story you have written about healthy sandwiches.
Bella I loved what you put on your healthy sandwich great job and the topping I liked was the cheese.
Bella I loved what kind of thing you have put into your sandwich and I bet it was yummy. Keep it up!
Hi Bella I like the way you did your writing and keep it up.
Hi bella I like how you made your sandwich with lots of healthy things inside your sandwich
Wow! Bella congratulations on your writing sandwich. Also I like how you put all those effort in it.
Hi bella I like your writing it look's cool .
Hi Bella I like your writing and your sentence is cool.
Hi Bella I like how you made your sandwich and I like the way you put lots of cheese and topping in your sandwich .
hi bella I like how you were makeiung a standwich so this is what I have to say to you keep up the good work .
Hello Bella
Great writing Bella,I bet your sandwich was yummy.
Keep up the great work Bella, your amazing.
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